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Friday, 29 August 2014

Writing Sample 3

Plan
Orientation: At school, Teacher and Student, Morning, Science. Body: Science, Teaching Jess, Experiment. Conclusion: Children these days are very smart and clever.

1 Its Tuesday and I am school in my science class. “Hello Jess and Jane” I say to them. “Hi Remy”.

2 As I go closer to them I can smell something. It smells like Gas and smoke. As I look at the experiment that they are working on I can see it starting to foam up. Then I start getting worried because it might explode everywhere. “Do you want to have a try at putting some liquid in to it Remy”. “Maybe”. As Jane gives the liquid to me my heart starts to beat fast. As I pour the liquid into the jug I start to calm down because nothing is happening its only foaming up.

3 As I pour the rest of the liquid in I say to the others “Children these days are very smart and clever and some are learning very fast.

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