Writing Sample 6

Plan

Orientation: Coach, Sam, Summers day, Dirtbikes.

Body: Course, Fear, Excitement, Bump, Dirt track.

Final Comment: As Sam is off the ground I say to myself “People are very good at sport and they are also brave. People also are very clever at the history of dirtbikes.

I’m ready to ride my dirtbike. I can see Sam riding his bike under the sun very calm and cool while his coach is cheering him on the sideline.

As he rides I start to panic because he has hit a bump. While he goes off the ground I can hear his coach on the sideline saying “Keep on going you can do it.” “I wonder if I can do that” I say to myself. “Whoa”. I can hear his bike going Broom!! Broom!!. While he is still in the air I say to myself “I wonder if he is feeling proud, sad, excited or scared.”

As Sam is off the ground I say to myself “People are very good at sport and they are also brave. People also are very clever at the history of dirtbikes.